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If i had a voice i would scream
I would let the sound echo off the mountains
And swim beneath the sea...
A scream, blacked out, and silenced...
For far to long.

If i had a voice i would sing,
Haunting notes, with church like acoustics
Floating on the wind to be carried far and near...
A catching melody bellied on your breath,
So that you might choose to sing along.

If i had a voice i would laugh,
Childlike laughter to carry us through,
Pained and Amused.
The laughter turned to song.

If i had a voice i would whisper,
Hot air forming on wind,
The element of secret truths,
Writhing at the bend

If i had a voice i would cry,
Choked off sobs of the quieted,
Salty tears with refractions of blood
My tears would have no end.

If i had a voice i would speak...
The words would cut like glass
Gouging holes in your conscienceness
Until you where open enough to listen
Until you could not condescend.

If i had a voice i would join it up with yours,
With those of similar octaves,
Our sound would drown out the deafening silence,
Until they could ignore us no more.

If i had a voice.

Copyright 2004
©2004-2009 ~thetwilight
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A poem about feeling voiceless in a loud world.

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:iconentwined-forever:
i know you dont want comments, but i love this poem :) *fave*

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:iconthetwilight:
Oh thank you :) I just didn't want anyone to come tell me how bad i suck... hehe
:iconsirus4me:
O.O very inspiring!
I really suck at poetry.
I love it!!! I have to add it 2 my favs!!! :+fav:

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...corruption inside and hateful crimes,
sorrowful days all full of despise
:iconentwined-forever:
lol well you dont have to worry about that :)

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:iconthetwilight:
Oh thank you! I'm going to come check out your stuff in a min :)
:iconestur:
wonderful theme here....Ya, its important to get that voice out there..whatever it has to say!

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"I saw this field that grew perfection, full of things you do..." -Boxcarracer: "Watch The World"

"Poetry is the opening and closing of a door, leaving those who look through to guess what is seen during a moment."
-Carl Sandburg
:iconsirus4me:
you're welcome...I love poetry im just no good at it.... ^^;

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..:† :jsenn: †:..
...corruption inside and hateful crimes,
sorrowful days all full of despise
:iconthetwilight:
hehe agreed. hence deviantart.com :)
:iconestur:
yup...tis a wonderful place to be!

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"I saw this field that grew perfection, full of things you do..." -Boxcarracer: "Watch The World"

"Poetry is the opening and closing of a door, leaving those who look through to guess what is seen during a moment."
-Carl Sandburg

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